A Chronicle of Evolving Work with Notes by the Artist Eileen Graham
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I agree, it is really good but needs something unexpected....something small looking out the window? Maybe a flat tire? Something slightly off to make the balance shift just slightly to make the brain think....
I love this painting and blog. I found it by chance but I will follow wiith interest.
How about throwing some fire-engine red in a few spots on that bike, as if it were being re-painted? That would be unexpected. Here's what I think happened--someone stole the bike from the owner, and dragged it around back to disguise the theft by painting it another color. Oops! They were spotted! And they took off!
I just happened upon your blog..I am a painter in watercolors but I think it needs some darks...make it pop!
I still think it needs a touch of red to make it pop.